Tuesday, October 1, 2013

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Morrell, Andrew. Maple Leaf on Shaker Grainite Beach.

Next to the canvas I laid the the autumn leaf that I picked up earlier, and I began to paint its likeness on the fabric, choosing a view so close that the leaf is all the viewer can see. The first leaf of autumn, once like all the rest in its green vitality but now blazing flame's colors, dying colors, that look so beautiful from afar. When I first picked it up, the leaf was like thousands of mountains and valleys in my hand, a fragile plate of land burning scarlet and gold with a bubbling coat of lava, but the painted likeness of the leaf on canvas seems a thing much stronger, like dragon skin, its green veins humming, its life impervious to any looming death, born from the fire that should have destroyed it. An idea is always stronger than the reality.
I painted the hours away, washing the brush in a ceramic cup full of water, drying it in a raggedy paint-splattered cloth, and dipping the brush in pigments arrayed on a thin piece of wood. Color after color was dipped in, mixed, deposited on the canvas, and washed from the brush, while the wind wound the sounds and smells of Atlantis around me, seeming to absorb even my thoughts, adding them to the tide and sweeping their echos out of the doorway to join the currents of Atlantis.

          

1 comment:

  1. "When I first picked it up, the leaf was like thousands of mountains and valleys in my hand..." This author's secondary posting, "Atlantis," leaves much to be desired by the readers of this particular post. Perhaps too much? While the content of this post is all quality, it is lacking one important element - quantity. Merely a paragraph of descriptive imagery and a link to an Atlantis Documentary is not nearly enough to sustain the audience devouring this post. The appearance of the post is compelling; the subtle hues of a teal green wallpaper and deep blue background add to the air of mystery created by the text, as the contrasting red/gold picture visually demands the reader's attention. The photo/video placement seems to be the most interesting and carefully selected components of this piece. Right justified and positioned directly in the textual area of the posting, the photo is easily the most favoured part of, “Atlantis.” The posting finishes off with a 45 minute documentary on Atlantis, located after the text and as an exciting, mystifying wrap-up to the author’s peek into this dreamlike world. The writing format is non-linear, yet lacking the conventional introduction and concluding thoughts that format a typical writing style. Structurally, this text is organized and chronological, told from a narrator's first-person perspective. The documentary video provided in this posting, "Atlantis: Lost World," is a logical choice, that further explains the figurative world the author is attempting to draw the audience into, the lost world of Atlantis. However, the lack of quantity in this posting diminishes the impact of the text. Just another paragraph would suffice to successfully portray the imagery and thematic elements the text conveys. The sizable lack of content should drastically be improved, because without it, the text is forgotten and unintentionally, superfluous.

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